Writer’s Memo
While writing this paper, I attempted to follow the forms and models put forth in the research papers we read in class during this unit. It was helpful to have something to follow while writing this report because I focused more on the “how” and “why” instead of the “what” of the research report structure. Overall, I found that this paper was much more organized than my last and I hope that this also improved the quality of my writing. I understand that this paper is longer than the assignment stated, but for good reason. The literary analysis follows the examples given in class and, therefore, takes up a considerable amount of room, considering that I cite three works in my paper from our textbook. Additonally, the findings
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Schmitke stated in her interview that “Our team knows that I check my email daily and they can readily get ahold of me through this method. Email also allows me to send important music files to the team that they can print off at home, and our church office uses email to send me documents to review for the ministry. I also use email as a scheduling device to set up practice times for smaller music ensembles and have used it to schedule piano lessons with a former student who has now graduated” (Schmitke). While email has many uses, differences across various applications can be seen while investigating its features.
Reflecting the research conducted by Bazerman, it is apparent that each worship team email must be written with the audience in mind. He states in his article that “...meanings do not reside fully in the words of the text nor in the unarticulated minds but only in the dynamic relation of writer, reader, and text” (Bazerman). Each email carries important information that must be understood by all the members of the team. An example of this is the first email I reviewed which stated:
Hello Praise
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Instead of discussing the song list for the week or the order of service, this email discusses the potential days for performance and a final decision agreed upon by all members. Additionally, the voice here is much different than the first sample cited prior. Not only do the individuals use familiar words and phrases like “Hey guys” and “as long as it works for Jenna,” one of the members uses a musical allusion to a famous Coldplay song titled “Viva La Vida” when she says “Viva la Frio Trio.” Granted, this email is a conversation among familiar friends, but it does show another side to the worship team email genre. As seen in this example, this genre can take on many forms both in its voice and in its content.
Concluding with the last email sample studied, supplementary genre features can be found. With the return of a long absent member, this last email takes a semi-familiar tone, while retaining the consistent structure and vocabulary recognized by all members. Schmitke states:
Hello Praise Team Week 3! We will have a special guest joining us this week; Patrick is coming home for a visit and will be playing the piano with us for most of the songs. You will notice that I have only listed 5 songs. The closing song is undergoing some last minute changes and as soon as we’ve figured it out, I will let you know. Here is the rest of the list for you to prep. See you Sunday at 8:00am. Heather
1. God Almighty 2. You
What do you think the author’s thesis, or main argument is, and why? Be sure to put his thesis in your own words.
The analysis itself is clear and concise and the author uses good evidence, both from the novella and the literature of his field. This is not for the literary scholar, but like Beveridge (2009) it is intended for practitioners in other fields. This does not mean that anyone
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In my essay I would like to analyze the main character, setting, language, theme and finally compare to other similar texts.
The email has been evaluated on its use of language and expression, tone and organisation.
2. What was interesting about the process you went through in writing this paper, and what did you learn from it? The process of researching the topic was very interesting because although I had already read the novel, re-reading parts of it allowed me to elaborate more in this assignment.
Describe your writing process for this paper: How did you choose an article to analyze? What methods did you use to read and analyze the article? What methods did you use to brainstorm your ideas? How did you decide on the organization of your paper?
"Constructing a Research Paper" is a unit from "Academic Writing for Graduate Students" was a third edition written by John M. Swales and Christine B. Feak, and published by the University of Michigan in 2012. This book mainly focuses on how to prepare international graduate students to write academic papers. This book consists of a total of 8 units, of which unit 8 explains how to construct a research paper (Swales & Feak, 2012).
Trace three of the following threads through the novel. In two paragraphs for each explain the various literary effects of each of the threads and how each is related to the theme. Use quotations from the novel to support each analysis.
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Third, is that email s an inefficient medium for in ambiguous, complex and novel situations”.