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Thesis Statement About Tattoos

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I. Introduction
• Attract Reader’s Attention: Tattoos are very popular among young adults these days. Some of them get tattoos to look cool, or they are influenced by other people. For others, tattoos represent a memory or incident that has a special meaning in their lives.
• Thesis Statement: People have different reasons for getting tattoos, but it does not matter what reason they have, good or bad, they will have to live with this decision for the rest of their lives.
• Plan of Development: The problem is that most of them do not think how that tattoo can affect their lives in the long term. They are exposing themselves to diseases and prejudice.
II. Body of Essay
A. Topic Sentence/Supporting Point #1: Reasons why …show more content…

A good and safe tattoo is not cheap.
Example: I have a friend who always wanted a tattoo. So one day he went to get his tattoo without knowing how much it was going to cost. When he got to the tattoo shop and saw the price and realized that he could not afford the tattoo, instead of waiting to save money, he went and got the tattoo with one of his friends who told him that he could give him the same tattoo for a lot less. He ended up getting the worst tattoo that I have ever seen and on top of that, it never healed completely. Now he is thinking about spending more money for a cover up or to have it removed completely.
C. Topic Sentence/Supporting Point #3: Tattoo discrimination in the workplace.
1. Although tattoos are popular, they can make it hard for a person to find a job.
Example: My brother applied for a job with UPS. He had a telephone interview, which was supposed to be followed by a meeting. Everything was fine until the employer started talking about the uniform policy and tattoos should be out of sight. When my brother admitted that he had both arms tattooed full sleeves, the employer hung up the phone.
2. To reduce the risk of not being able to find a job, people get tattoos that are easily hidden under

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