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Attention Getters For Zoos

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Zoos are internment camps for animals and should be shut down. John Omoyinmi Mrs Costa English 4U 20 January 2016 Introduction Attention getter: Think about having to live your whole life in a cage, where you are surrounded by people you are not familiar with. Would you like that? But this is how live is for animals in the zoos. Thesis statement: Zoos are internment camps for animals, and it should be shut down because of all the mistreatment and bad effects it has caused on animals. These bad effects and mistreatment can be summarized to three major points, which are: Essay mapping: a) Zoos are unsafe for animals. b) Zoos aren’t educative. c) Zoos do not help animals. Paragraph 1: It is true that Zoos are dangerous for animals …show more content…

Supporting proof 2: this is the reason why most zoos you have been to, would normally have endangered animals locked up for a long time. Commentary for proof 2: If zoos want to help endangered animals, they should provide money to preserve their environments. Supporting point 3: Zoos main agenda for caging animals is for them to make profit from them, and not rear the animals. Supporting proof 3: Zoos would not to be, if there is no profit in the business. Commentary for proof 3: This is the reason why in zoos, their other activities that may not relate to animals at all, but allows the zoo owners to be able make money. Conclusion: In conclusion, zoos are bad for animals because of the bad effects and mistreatment it has caused on animals. Work cited "5 SECRETS ZOOS DON’T WANT YOU TO KNOW." Peta Kids. Peta Kids Inc. Web. 18 Jan. 2016. . Carr, Michelle. "The Reality of Zoos." Http://www.peta.org. Web. 21 Jan. 2016. . "Zoos." Vegan Peace Striving towards Peacefully Sharing Our Earth. Web. 21 Jan. 2016.

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